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nothing but darkness
a thought pulses through
a world is forming
a light illuminates the sea
a speck of dirt falls from above
a world is forming
a plant has grown on the dirt
an ant crawls up upon it
a world is forming
©2008-2009 ~jaked122
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a bit of creation

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:iconauranan:
Beautiful descriptions of creationism, indeed. I'm intrigued by this idea of the origin of life. Many with different theories. I just wish that this world that was created wasn't contaminated by us. Imagine what the world would look like before humanity? I'd rather that.

I must admit, I love your recent work more than what I've read before. Judging by your writing, your improving your style along with yourself.

Nicely done:D I'm looking forward to seeing more:D

~V~

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A man is accepted into a church for what he believes and he is turned out for what he knows. - Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain)
:iconjaked122:
without us there was nobody that would and could observe such beauty, to observe is to contaminate in a way

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:iconauranan:
Your exactly right. It does contaminate it, in a way, because our corrupted souls are witnessing it.

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A man is accepted into a church for what he believes and he is turned out for what he knows. - Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain)
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no, I mean our presence no matter how far away, will change somethings unfold

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:iconauranan:
Ahh...I see.

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A man is accepted into a church for what he believes and he is turned out for what he knows. - Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain)
:icontapeking:
Yay, creation! Beautiful imagery.

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"I hear Jerusalem bells are ringing
Roman Cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
For some reason I can not explain
I know Saint Peter won't call my name..."


-Coldplay, Vida la Vida

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