Sincerely, this is my favorite piece you've written thus far. Both the content in the structure is skillfully written. With my critical eye, I can't see pinpoint anything out of place.

The imagery that describes Gaia(mother earth) inevitable is breathtaking. Repetition of "the sun is dying" certainly made an impact on me as the reader. From this simple phrase, I interpret it as hope and faith dwindling for humanity, dieing with our self-destruction.

Near the end, I perceive that remnants of us has "transcended" into something else, leaving the desolate world behind...perhaps resembling death, and passing on.

Again, nice job*pats on back*

~V~

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A man is accepted into a church for what he believes and he is turned out for what he knows. - Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain)

you figured out my meaning exactly

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I feel accomplished that I have deciphered the meaning accurately in your interpretation.

Again, I continue you to say I love how this one was written. It's beautifully constructed with a frightening meaning. However, I'm honest when I say that I don't fear it. Rather, I would welcome it when the my hourglass is up.

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A man is accepted into a church for what he believes and he is turned out for what he knows. - Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain)

the only path out of life is eternal salvation, and after that being elevated to the status of angels, or cherubs if you believe in either.
"if man were governed by angels no government would be needed"- one of the framers

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What if you don't believe...Well, we did go over this subject before, but it was the first question that came to mind. I've heard of this view before, and I believe it, but not in the way you think.

haha Government is needed either way. It rules us because the majority allows it.

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A man is accepted into a church for what he believes and he is turned out for what he knows. - Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain)

damn, why must the majority seem to be comprised of people who are either numskulls or people who are deceitful and intelligent yet want to destroy what we have in this country

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I really don't understand it either The absurdity of it all is ridiculous. Sometimes I don't know whether to laugh or cry.

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A man is accepted into a church for what he believes and he is turned out for what he knows. - Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain)

hmm, I wonder how we changed the subject to this?

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hehe I make that possible...I connect things that seem like random.

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A man is accepted into a church for what he believes and he is turned out for what he knows. - Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain)